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-# Speak Danish in your first lesson
+# Learn Danish with ease !
 
-and
 
-the next and the next !
 
+*Have fun* learning Danish alone or with other adults eager to be able to practice and understand everyday Danish.
 
 
-*Have fun* learning Danish alone or together with other adults eager to be able to practice and understand everyday Danish.
-
-*Learn in an atmosphere of ease !*
-
-
-When you choose to learn with me, it's in an informal atmosphere where the focus is on YOU and your needs and desires.   
+When you choose to study with me, the atmosphere is informal and the focus is on YOU and your needs and desires.   
 
 By allowing the learning process to be affective and relating, your motivation and ability to achieve new language skills are improved.
 
-Though the atmosphere is informal, you still have to  practice pronunciation, bend verbs, know some basic grammar and do homework.   
+Though the atmosphere is informal, you will still have to  practice pronunciation, bend verbs, know some basic grammar and do homework.   
 
 
 My goals for your achievements are high.
 
-You must take responsibility for your learning process by asking anything and everything of importance to you.
+You must take responsibility for your own learning process by asking anything and everything of importance to you.
 
-You learn by practicing the Danish language. Through trial and errors you get better, better and better - inch by inch - bit by bit - word after word - and:
+Choosing me as your Danish teacher, you learn by doing. Through trial and error you get better, better and better - inch by inch - bit by bit - word after word - and:
 
-##Before you know of it - you speak Danish.
+##You'll actually speak Danish already in your first lesson!
 
 
-##Ready for your first step ?
+## Are you ready for your first step ?
 
-Send an e-mail to: <info@birgitmaanestraale.dk> in order to get a list with resources to get you started.
+Send an e-mail to: <info@birgitmaanestraale.dk> in order to get a list of resources to get you started.
 
 Or: Send an e-mail to <info@birgitmaanestraale.dk> to make your first appointment.
 
-A pre-lesson costs 2.100 kr. with 1-10 participants held in a meeting room provided by you.
+A pre-lesson costs 2.100 kr. for 1-10 participants held in a meeting room provided by you.
 
-##Are you ready to say 'Yes' 
-to a class of 15 x 90 minutes or 15 x 135 minutes:      
- 
-Ask for your preferred week-day and meeting period.       
-Price for a class of 15 meetings of 90 minutes = 30.000 kr. /    
-15 meeting of 135 minutes = 45.000 kr.    
-Extra for books, meeting room and transportation apply. [[Read more|priser]]
+## Are you ready to say 'Yes' 
+to a course of 15 lessons of 90 minutes or 15 lessons of 135 minutes:
+
+*Flexible scheduling* - ask for your preferred week-day and meeting period via <info@birgitmaanestraale.dk>
+
+Price for a class of 15 lessonss of 90 minutes = 30.000 kr. /    
+Price for a class of 15 lessons of 135 minutes = 45.000 kr.     
+Additional expenses to cover books, meeting room and transportation apply - as per agrement. [[Read more|priser]]
 
-Extra lessons for actual or former students can be bought as follows:   
+Additional lessons for actual or former students:   
 
 1 x 45 minutes: 450 kr.   
 2 x 45 minutes: 700 kr.   
-3 x 45 minutes: 900 kr.
+3 x 45 minutes: 900 kr.   
 12 x 45 minutes: 3.000 kr.   
 
 
@@ -67,12 +62,12 @@ Extra lessons for actual or former students can be bought as follows:
 
 * I interact with you, giving you opportunity to use Danish   
 
-* I understand your frustrations and challenges because I've, as an adult, had experiences of how it is not being able to express oneself      
+* I understand your frustrations and challenges because, as an adult, I've had experiences of what it is like not being able to express oneself      
 
 *	I dare you - and I “hold your hand” while learning “to dare to speak”   
 
-*	I encourage you to: Keep on keeping on - in order to reach your goal: *Being able to understand, speak and write everyday Danish.*   
+*	I encourage you to: Keep on keeping on - in order for you to reach your goal: *Being able to understand, speak and write everyday Danish.*   
 
 
 
-For appointments or further information: E-mail: <info@birgitmaanestraale.dk>
+For appointments or further information: Write me via: <info@birgitmaanestraale.dk>