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diff --git a/sprog/danish.mdwn b/sprog/danish.mdwn
index d4ec2227..fbe73506 100644
--- a/sprog/danish.mdwn
+++ b/sprog/danish.mdwn
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ the next and the next !
 
 
 
-*Have fun* learning Danish alone or together with other adults eager to be able to use and understand colloquial Danish.
+*Have fun* learning Danish alone or together with other adults eager to be able to practice and understand everyday Danish.
 
 *Learn in an atmosphere of ease !*
 
@@ -18,15 +18,13 @@ By allowing the learning process to be affective and relating, your motivation a
 Though the atmosphere is informal, you still have to  practice pronunciation, bend verbs, know some basic grammar and do homework.   
 
 
-You and I do have high goals for your achievements and we are targeted.
+My goals for your achievements are high.
 
+You must take responsibility for your learning process by asking anything and everything of importance to you.
 
-You are allowed to ask anything and everything that's important to you.
+You learn by practicing the Danish language. Through trial and errors you get better, better and better - inch by inch - bit by bit - word after word - and:
 
-You learn by using the Danish language. Through trial and errors you get better, better and better - inch by inch - bit by bit - word after word - and:
-
-##Before you know of it - you speak Danish 
-which others understand.
+##Before you know of it - you speak Danish.
 
 
 ##Ready for your first step ?
@@ -38,19 +36,20 @@ Or: Send an e-mail to <info@birgitmaanestraale.dk> to make your first appointmen
 A pre-lesson costs 2.100 kr. with 1-10 participants held in a meeting room provided by you.
 
 ##Are you ready to say 'Yes' 
-to a module of 15 x 90 minutes or 15 x 135 minutes:      
+to a class of 15 x 90 minutes or 15 x 135 minutes:      
  
 Ask for your preferred week-day and meeting period.       
-Price for a module of 15 meetings of 90 minutes = 30.000 kr. /    
+Price for a class of 15 meetings of 90 minutes = 30.000 kr. /    
 15 meeting of 135 minutes = 45.000 kr.    
 Extra for books, meeting room and transportation apply. [[Read more|priser]]
 
 Extra lessons for actual or former students can be bought as follows:   
 
+1 x 45 minutes: 450 kr.   
+2 x 45 minutes: 700 kr.   
+3 x 45 minutes: 900 kr.
+12 x 45 minutes: 3.000 kr.   
 
-1 lesson of 45 minutes: 450 kr.   
-2 lessons of 45 minutes: 700 kr.   
-3 lessons of 45 minutes: 900 kr.
 
 
 *Learn in a "live environment"  informal but targeted.*
@@ -68,11 +67,11 @@ Extra lessons for actual or former students can be bought as follows:
 
 * I interact with you, giving you opportunity to use Danish   
 
-* I understand your frustrations and challenges because I have experiences of how it is, as an adult, not being able to express oneself      
+* I understand your frustrations and challenges because I've, as an adult, had experiences of how it is not being able to express oneself      
 
 *	I dare you - and I “hold your hand” while learning “to dare to speak”   
 
-*	I encourage you to: Keep on keeping on - in order to reach your goal: *Being able to understand, speak and write colloquial Danish.*   
+*	I encourage you to: Keep on keeping on - in order to reach your goal: *Being able to understand, speak and write everyday Danish.*