4 files changed, 39 insertions, 33 deletions
diff --git a/en/farbar.mdwn b/en/farbar.mdwn
index 18540b66..4db98e8c 100644
--- a/en/farbar.mdwn
+++ b/en/farbar.mdwn
@@ -5,31 +5,35 @@ link=https://www.facebook.com/BirgitManestrale?fref=ts]]
 
 Let me show you how   
 you can   
-learn Danish with ease   
-and/or    
-let me show you tools   
-and
-give you inspiration 
-to
-clarify  
-and
 achieve your dreams
 by focusing on   
 Possibility 
 Thinking.
 
-Begin by
-making a   
+Let me show you tools   
+and  
+give you inspiration   
+to    
+clarify   
+what you really want  
+and    
+let me   
+'hold your hand'  
+while you  
+step by step   
+make your dreams  
+come true.
+
+Begin with a   
 *free*   
-20 minute
-appointment
-via phone or
-Skype.
+30-40-minute
+initial conversation
+via Zoom.
 
 Suggest your favourite
 time slot
-between 8 am & 8 pm
+between 8 am and 8 pm
 on weekdays
-by writing to
+by sending an email to
 
-<info@birgitmaanestraale.dk>   
+<birgit.maanestraale@mail.dk>   
diff --git a/en/space_for_you/prices.mdwn b/en/space_for_you/prices.mdwn
index 913f1e1e..713c59b2 100644
--- a/en/space_for_you/prices.mdwn
+++ b/en/space_for_you/prices.mdwn
@@ -19,13 +19,13 @@ Suggest a time that suits you via <birgit.maanestraale@mail.dk>
 
 *After our initial conversation*   you can choose to buy my attention just-for-you as  
 
-1 x 45 minutes of my attention for DKK 450, which is approximately 65 USdollars/ Euro
+1 x approximately 40 minutes of my attention for DKK 450, which is approximately 65 USdollars/ Euro
 
 3 x 20 minutes for DKK 900 = approx. 130 USD/ Euro
 
 9 x 20 minutes for DKK 2.400 = approx. 340 USD/ Euro
 
-*Alternatively* you can consider becoming a member of *Club do it 7 days* which with a monthly pay of DKK 400 = approx. 60 USD/ Euro gives you my and the other members attention on a regular basis PLUS you are invited to be part of 2-5 online 'inspirational meetings' on Sundays from 7 to 7.45, Danish time/ ECT, Copenhagen - plus - once in a while on a (more) convenient time for you.
+*Alternatively* you can consider becoming a member of *Club do it 7 days* which with a monthly pay of DKK 400 = approx. 60 USD/ Euro gives you my and the other members attention on a regular basis PLUS you are invited to be part of 'inspirational meetings' on Sundays from 8pm to approximately 9 pm Danish time/ ECT, Copenhagen - plus - once in a while on a (more) convenient time for you.
 
 [[Click here|/en/space_for_you]] to read more about *Space for you*.
 
diff --git a/en/steps/prices.mdwn b/en/steps/prices.mdwn
index e1adaf6f..fbb65bc4 100644
--- a/en/steps/prices.mdwn
+++ b/en/steps/prices.mdwn
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
-# Prices for Tiny steps often
+# Prices for Find and Manifest your dreams - step by step
 [[!img icon.png class=icon size=150x150 link=none]]
 
-Read about the 3-hour workshop [[Find and manifest your dreams - step by step|/en/steps/workshop]].
+Read about the approximately 3-hour workshop [[Find and Manifest your dreams - step by step|/en/steps/workshop]].
 
 [[!img priser/icon.png class=icon size=200x200 link=none]]
 
@@ -10,14 +10,15 @@ To make an appointment that suits you:
 Write to: <birgit.maanestraalel@mail.dk>  
 
 
-## Participation fee - online - via the platform Zoom:
+## Participation fee for Find and Manifest your dreams - online - via the platform Zoom:
 
 We will meet at least three times on the date, that we agree on via the platform Zoom. 
-We meet at 9 o'clock where we talk and take the initial steps, including answers to your questions. 
-Then you are assigned a task which you do on you own.
-We meet again when you are ready for example at one o'clock for a status, follow up, more information and inspiration as well as a new task.
-You, again, get free time for reflection and one or more tasks.
-At the latest 4 o'clock we meet again for status, feedback, questions, answers, laser coaching and a final evaluation.
+
+* We meet at 9 o'clock where we talk and take the initial steps, including answers to your questions.    
+* Then you are assigned a task which you do on you own.   
+* We meet again when you are ready for example at 11 o'clock for a status, follow up, more information and inspiration as well as a new task.   
+* You, again, get free time for reflection and one or more task.   
+* We meet at 1 o'clock or as per agreement, at the latest 4 o'clock for status, feedback, questions, answers, laser coaching and a final evaluation.   
 
 We can agree on a course-day on a Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday or Saturday.
 
@@ -36,7 +37,6 @@ At 4 participatnts the fee per person is DKK 900 *+
 ## Participation fee on location (For example in my city Fredensborg, north of Copenhagen, Denmark - or a location more convenient for you, as per agreement).
 
 
-
 3.600 DKK *+  when you sign up 'alone'  
 1.800 DKK *+ per person, when you sign up with a friend or colleague  
 1.200 DKK *+ per person, when you sign up with two friends or colleagues  
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ At 4 participatnts the fee per person is DKK 900 *+
 750 DKK *+ per person, when you sign up with four or more friends/ colleagues/ family members...  
 
 
-*+ = Prices are valid as per the 6th of May 2024, includes Danish VAT and course materials.
+*+ = Prices are valid as per the 12th of November 2024, includes Danish VAT and course materials.
 Surcharge for meeting room and, in advance agreed on, possible costs for transportation and accommodation.
 
 For on location workshops you will also get this:  
diff --git a/en/steps/workshop.mdwn b/en/steps/workshop.mdwn
index b900727a..0d000453 100644
--- a/en/steps/workshop.mdwn
+++ b/en/steps/workshop.mdwn
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# Find and manifest your dreams - step by step
+# Find and Manifest your dreams - step by step
 [[!img icon.png class=icon size=200x200 link=none]]
 
 
@@ -7,6 +7,8 @@ Choose the 3-hour Workshop
  * to get started
  * to go to your next level ...
 
+*For you who want to reach your next goal - step by step.*
+
 *Let me show you how – you can* get what you really want.
 
 [[!more linktext="Read more here" text="""
@@ -29,18 +31,18 @@ Using the tools Catharsis Writing and Creative Visualization will help you overc
 Find inspiration to keep a Positive Diary.
 
 The tools presented to you are simple yet profound and also easily implemented.
-They will create a positive change in your life.
+When you use the tools, you have the potential of creating a positive change in your life.
 
 The workshop is 3 hours of intense focus on you. You get my focused attention
 and tools to support you in achieving what you really wish for and want.
 
-For actual dates please connect via email to <birgit.maanestraale@mail.dk>
+To agree on a date please connect via email to <birgit.maanestraale@mail.dk>
 
 For information about participant fee: [[Click here.|en/steps/prices]]
 
 For more info  
 Send an e-mail to <birgit.maanestraale@mail.dk>  
-or phone me at +45 29 31 79 01
+
 
 """]]