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@@ -2,10 +2,10 @@
 
 
 
-*Have fun* learning Danish alone or with other adults eager to be able to practice and understand everyday Danish.
+*Have fun* learning Danish alone or with other adult students eager to practice and understand everyday Danish.
 
 
-When you choose to study with me, the atmosphere is informal and the focus is on YOU and your needs and desires.   
+When you choose to study with me, the atmosphere is informal - and - the focus is on YOU, your needs and desires.   
 
 By allowing the learning process to be affective and relating, your motivation and ability to achieve new language skills are improved.
 
@@ -16,42 +16,33 @@ My goals for your achievements are high.
 
 You must take responsibility for your own learning process by asking anything and everything of importance to you.
 
-Choosing me as your Danish teacher, you learn by doing. Through trial and error you get better, better and better - inch by inch - bit by bit - word after word - and:
+When choosing me as your Danish teacher, you will learn by doing. Through trial and error you'll get better, better and better - inch by inch - bit by bit - word by word - and:
 
-##You'll actually speak Danish already in your first lesson!
+##You'll actually speak Danish in your first lesson!
 
 
-## Are you ready for your first step ?
+## Are you ready for the first step ?
 
-* Send an e-mail to: <birgit.maanestraale@mail.dk> in order to get a list of resources to get you started.
+*Send an e-mail to: <birgit.maanestraale@mail.dk>*   
 
-Or: 
+* to get a list of resources to get you started   
 
-* Send an e-mail to <birgit.maanestraale@mail.dk> to make your first appointment.   
+* to make your first appointment    
 
-Or:   
+* to make an appointment for a pre-lesson of approx. 2 hours - just for you or for a group from 2-12 participants - for 1.600 dkr. in a meeting room provided by you. (If we meet outside the Copenhagen area transportation costs are added). Suggest your favorite week-day or favorite date and time.
 
-* Choose an e-mailsubscription of [['Learn Danish - every day'|gratis_dansk]]
-- (for free) - by writing: 'Ja tak til at lære dansk hver dag' to <birgit.maanestraale@mail.dk>   
-
-Or: 
-
-* Choose an e-mailsubscription of "ask anything" for 600 dkk pr. month - by writing to <birgit.maanestraale@mail.dk>   
-
-Or:
-
-* Make an appointment for a pre-lesson of approx. 2 hours for 1.600 dkk, held in a meeting room provided by you. If we meet outside the Copenhagen area cost for transportation is added. Participate alone or invite up to 12 participants.   
-For an actual date: Write <birgit.maanestraale@mail.dk>
+ * to choose an e-mailsubscription of [['Learn Danish - every day'|gratis_dansk]]
+(free of charge) - by writing: 'Ja tak til at lære dansk hver dag' 
 
 ## Are you ready to say 'Yes' 
 to a course of 15 lessons of 120 minutes:
 
-*Flexible scheduling* - ask for your preferred week-day and meeting period via <birgit.maanestraale@mail.dk>   
+*Flexible scheduling* - ask for your preferred week-day and time at  <birgit.maanestraale@mail.dk>   
 
-Price for a Danish language course of 15 lessons of 120 minutes with 1, 2, 3 or 4   (or more)students = 24.000 kr. + additional expenses to cover books, meeting room and transportation - as per agreement.
+Price for a Danish language course of 15 lessons of 120 minutes with 1, 2, 3 or 4   (or more) students = 24.000 dkr. + additional expenses to cover books, meeting room and transportation - as per agreement.
 
 Additional lessons for actual or former students:  
-"Prices as per agreement" - to be obtained via <birgit.maanestraale@mail.dk> 
+"Prices as per agreement" - to be obtained by writing <birgit.maanestraale@mail.dk> 
 
 ## Learn in a "live environment"  informal but targeted.
 
@@ -68,15 +59,16 @@ Additional lessons for actual or former students:
 
 * I interact with you, giving you opportunity to use Danish   
 
-* I understand your frustrations and challenges because, as an adult, I've had experiences of what it is like not being able to express oneself      
+* I understand your frustrations and challenges because, as an adult, I've  experienced not being able to express myself      
 
 *	I dare you - and I “hold your hand” while learning “to dare to speak”   
 
-*	I encourage you to: Keep on keeping on - in order for you to reach your goal: *Being able to understand, speak and write everyday Danish.*   
+*	I encourage you to: Keep on keeping on - in order for you to reach your goal:   
+ *Being able to understand, speak and write everyday Danish.*   
 
 
 
-For appointments or further information: Write me via: <birgit.maanestraale.@mail.dk>   
+For appointments and further information: Write me at: <birgit.maanestraale.@mail.dk>   
 
 [[!tag laer_dansk dansk danskundervisning learn_danish danish language danish_language]]