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 # Walk & Talk with a local.
 
-While on holiday you might want to ’catch the possibility’ of getting an extraordinary experience of ’being present here and now’, picking up ideas or solutions on subjects of importance to you, while strolling in the beautiful suroundings of Fredensborg Castle and the lake of Esrum in the northeren part of Sealand in Denmark, Europe.
+##Are you a visitor to Fredensborg? 
+And: Do you want a personal tourguide with whom you can 'walk & talk'?
 
-May I suggest you choose me, Birgit Månestråle, as your Walk & Talk guide and coach.
-I have lived in the cosy town of Fredensborg for more than a decade and have been coaching and teaching tools and skills for personal growth since 1985.
+While on holiday you might want to ’catch the possibility’ of getting an extraordinary experience of ’being present here and now’, picking up ideas or solutions on subjects of importance to you, while strolling in the beautiful suroundings of Fredensborg  Castle in the northern Zealand, Denmark.
 
-As of your preferences, we will be passing the castle of Fredensborg, the summerresidens of Queen Margrethe the II. Enjoying the well trimmed and open Castle garden, see the sculptures in Nordmandsdalen (a valley with scuptures of Norwegian and Faroese natives made of sandstone). And/ or you might enjoy the lake of Esrum and walking on trails where, most often, only the local citizens passes. 
+Choose time with me, Birgit Månestråle, who have lived in this cosy city for more than a decade and as a profession, since 1985, practices as teacher and coach with the aim of personal growth.
 
-If you prefer, we can visit one of the local bakeries (one is glutenfree), a cafe or just a bench in order to enjoy a refreshment. As a summer visitor, be sure to enjoy a Hansen ice cream at 'Ishuset" at the lake of Esrum (before, during or after our tour).
+I offer you walks of approx. 2 hours around the castle of Fredensborg, the summerresidens of Queen Margrethe the II.
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+While walking and talking with focus of subjects important to you, we can enjoy the well trimmed gardens of the Castle, enjoy the sculptures of Norwegian and Faroese natives, made of sandstone in Nordmandsdalen, the lake of Esrum, and walk on trails where most often, only the local citizens pass.
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+If you prefer, we can visit one of the local bakeries (one is glutenfree), a café or just sit on a bench while enjoying a refreshment. As a summer visitor, be sure to enjoy a Hansen ice cream at 'Ishuset" at the lake of Esrum (before, during or after our tour).
 Also: You might want to visit the local bookstore to obtain historical information of the castle and the town.
 
 Meeting point: Hotel Store Kro at the tourist office in Slotsgade 6 - DK-3480 Fredensborg.
 
-Duration: Approximately 2 - 2 1/2 hours for singles or couples.
+Duration: Approximately 2 - 2 1/2 hours.
+Choose hours between 6 a.m. and 8 p.m. all year.
 
 Fee: DKK 850** for one person.
 Fee: DKK 1.200** for couples.
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 Fee: DKK 1.500** for families or groups of 3 - 6 persons.  
 
 ** = plus costs to refreshments if wanted, plus entrance fee to the Royal Palace and the Royal garden, if wanted.
 
-Booking via info@birgitmaanestraale.dk
+More information and booking via info@birgitmaanestraale.dk
 
 Payment to Danske Bank: 3544 - 3544 36 59 67