From 3df5e6df7bc9dea43ce28c0745be84ce04f1b284 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Siri Reiter <siri@jones.dk>
Date: Thu, 22 Oct 2015 14:22:48 +0200
Subject: Rephrase text about the exchange of experience.

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 india.mdwn | 19 ++++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/india.mdwn b/india.mdwn
index 7bc0f68..0f572fe 100644
--- a/india.mdwn
+++ b/india.mdwn
@@ -2,13 +2,11 @@
 During December 2015 and January 2016 we plan to stay in India,
 visiting friends and working with local Linux distributions.
 
-We work on improving [Debian Pure Blends][]
-- i.e. the ability for Debian to adapt for local needs
-while staying purely Debian, not forking.
-In that work, we want to gain experience
-with local projects based on Debian.
-We can help them streamline their work,
-and they can help us understand better what they need streamlined.
+We are both involved in Free Software,
+with a special interest in [design][] and [custom][] systems.
+
+Our friends in India have concrete experiences
+that we are curious to tap into, and vice versa.
 
 Plans are still rough, but we want to visit these:
 
@@ -22,11 +20,14 @@ Plans are still rough, but we want to visit these:
   in [Kathmandu][], [Nepal][Kathmandu OSM].
 
 So we do not seek jobs in India
-- but also are not on holiday:
+- but we are not on holiday either:
 We both have customers back in Denmark
 that we continue to serve remotely.
 
-[Debian Pure Blends]: <https://wiki.debian.org/DebianPureBlends#Terminology>
+[design]: <https://wiki.debian.org/Design/>
+  "Debian Design - improving Debian for designers"
+
+[custom]: <https://wiki.debian.org/DebianPureBlends#Terminology>
   "Debian Pure Blends - subset of Debian configured for a target group"
 
 [Hamara Linux]: <https://www.hamaralinux.org/>
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