From 856ac60b55af5f0f411d5a04ca4a14fdc1a972c4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jonas Smedegaard <dr@jones.dk>
Date: Thu, 18 May 2017 16:48:07 +0200
Subject: Refine text on external players.

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 templates/video.mdwn | 15 ++++++++++-----
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/templates/video.mdwn b/templates/video.mdwn
index bd96cec..23bcd64 100644
--- a/templates/video.mdwn
+++ b/templates/video.mdwn
@@ -17,11 +17,16 @@
 </div><TMPL_IF live-app>
 <p><strong>Recommendations:</strong>
 <ul>
-<li>Best: Desktop/laptop computer with dedicated media player <a href="https://mpv.io/">mpv</a>
-(or the slightly heavier <a href="http://bakamplayer.u8sand.net/">Baka</a> or <a href="https://lhc70000.github.io/iina/">IINA</a>),
-and play the <TMPL_UNLESS nom3u8><a href="//media.couchdesign.dk/<TMPL_VAR stem>.m3u8">HLS</a> stream.
-<li> Good: Desktop/laptop computer with recent version of <a href="https://mozilla.org/firefox/">Firefox</a>.
-<li>NB! Infrequent "freeze"s of a few seconds may occur, or on iPhone up to 10 seconds.
+<li>Best: Pass the <TMPL_UNLESS nom3u8><a href="//media.couchdesign.dk/<TMPL_VAR stem>.m3u8">HLS</a> stream
+on a desktop/laptop computer
+with the dedicated media player <a href="https://mpv.io/">mpv</a>
+(or the slightly heavier <a href="http://bakamplayer.u8sand.net/">Baka</a>
+or <a href="https://lhc70000.github.io/iina/">IINA</a>).
+<li> Good: Watch this page
+on a desktop/laptop computer
+with a recent version of <a href="https://mozilla.org/firefox/">Firefox</a>.
+<li>NB! Infrequent "freeze"s of a few seconds may occur,
+or on iPhone up to 10 seconds.
 </TMPL_UNLESS></p>
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